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ACT TWO
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33 EXT. LAGOON TEST AREA - LONG SHOT - THE SCENE - DAY Virdon and Burke stand amid several curious Villagers who have gathered to see these two strangers without armbands pass the test of swimming under fire which will qualify them to become producing spear fishermen. The water in the lagoon is quiet now.
34 ANGLE ON ARMED GUARD
With a lighted torch
as he tosses it toward the oil-covered water
PANNING WITH ITS ARC
as it lights in the water
and suddenly ignites the surface into a sheet of flame.
35 WIDE ANGLE
Amid cheers of encouragement, a YOUNG HUMAN approaches the edge of the flaming lagoon. He turns to raise a clenched fist proudly to the crowd watching, then plunges into the water. Hes a magnificent specimen who swims strongly to a point near the flames, then submerges.
36 ANGLE ON VIRDON AND BURKE
reacting.
VIRDON Think hes got a chance?
BURKE Probably been in training. We go that route without even a test run!
37 WIDE ANGLE
Young Human appears at the far side of the flames, swims triumphantly to the shore as the crowd cheers.
38 ANGLE ON VIRDON AND BURKE
watching.
VIRDON He made it. It is possible.
BURKE Some justice. we save a little old guy from the sharks and
and theyre going to try and drown and bar-b-que us at the same time. We see Two Armed Guards, with Hurton, walking their way. Virdon and Burke notice.
VIRDON Some choice! If we dont make it they kill us. If we do, we get life
spearing fish for some
fertilizer factory.
BURKE (glance at Guards) No chance to make a break
VIRDON He wouldnt want to lose two prime producers. As Hurton and an ARMED AIDE approach:
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39 INT. CAVE - ANGLE ON GALEN AND GAHTO - DAY
Galen is just walking into the mouth of the cave to see old Gahto, still dying in his sitting-leaning position. Galen munches on berries he has collected.
GALEN Hah! Maybe you are not too dead to eat a few berries
? Galen kneels, extends his handful of berries. 40 ANGLE ON GAHTO
He looks straight ahead
as if in shock.
GAHTO I have failed the gods
I am dead.
GALEN My friends have a saying
I think it goes like this
You are a pain in the neck. Galen stands
worried about something else.
GALEN And if anythings happened to them
I will personally feed you to the sharks
piece by piece.
GAHTO It is the will of the gods
GALEN Oh shut up! It is the will of Galen
(jabbing his own chest)
that you stay right here. My friends have been gone a day. Im going to look for them. Do you understand? No response from Gahto. In frustration, Galen turns and leaves.
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41 EXT. LAGOON TEST AREA - DAY
Hurton is standing near Virdon and Burke, accompanied by his Armed Aide. Hurton is aloof and superior
but showing a certain anticipation. He views his new specimens
tapping out physical attributes with his riding crop
HURTON Look at that. Limbs as strong as a young horse. Lungs like a whale. He whacks Burke on the chest. And says for the Aide to hear
one really does not talk to humans, as a rule.
HURTON When the run of the fish is good, they should produce an extra two, three hundred pounds a day! Virdon and Burke exchange looks on this appraisal.
HURTON Test them! The Armed Aide steps forward, motioning with his gun.
ARMED AIDE Come
42 ANOTHER ANGLE - FROM THE WATER
We see the group of village men part and Virdon, Burke and Hurton walk toward the water and a cluster of spears stuck upright in the earth near the water. As they approach, another Armed Guard plucks out one of the spears and hands it to Virdon.
43 ANGLE ON VIRDON AND BURKE
as Virdon takes the spear.
BURKE Good luck, buddy
you won the toss
44 WIDER ANGLE - ON SCENE
as Virdon walks to the water. Village men approach, holding back with an uncertain curiosity. Virdon steps into the clear water, looks beyond to the flaming barrier he must swim under. A beat of hesitation
and the Guard raises his gun and fires a SHOT into the water near Virdon.
45 ANGLE ON BURKE
flinching, from the no-foolishness of these Apes.
BURKE (concern) I think thats the starting gun --
46 ANGLE ON SCENE
Virdon, spear in hand, plunges into the water, disappears under the surface. Hurton steps forward, crosses his arms
waits. Burke, silently, his fists clenched like hes urging his team to the goal line
the Villagers exchanging looks
when Virdon seems long in appearing. An extra long beat
Virdon is still under the water.
47 ANGLE ON HURTON
A look of disppointment, some anger
has he been duped?
48 ANGLE ON BURKE
Concern for his friend growing
straining for a look
49 BACK TO SCENE
As everyone is just stirring with bewilderment, concern
we see Virdon emerge from the water on the far side of the flames
spear in hand
raising it
and he has a fish on it!
A cheer goes up from the Village humans
this is not an expected part of the test
here is a real fisherman who will help ease the pressure on them to continually increase production. Hurton has a pleased look. The Armed Aide expresses surprise
and all now turn to Burke.
50 ANGLE ON BURKE looking across to Virdon
a resigned look
shaking his head.
BURKE Youre a hard act to follow!
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51 EXT. BEACH - ANGLE AT THE EMPTY RAFT - DAY
A Mounted Patrol, his horse standing near, is leaning over and examining the raft from which Gahto was taken. He examines the knife-sliced thongs. An expression of official anger
someone has defied the gods! He quickly mounts up and rides off
galloping down the beach.
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52 EXT. LAGOON TEST AREA - AS BEFORE - DAY
Only Burke is now at the waters edge with spear in hand. Virdon stands on the opposite side, another Guard in the b.g. As Burke dives into the water
takes a whales breath
and dives in. Several long beats
not a ripple in the flaming water.
53 ANGLE ON HURTON
expectant
but concerned.
54 ANGLE ON VIRDON
looking back across the water, an anxious look when he doesnt see his friend emerge
55 ANGLE SHOOTING PAST VIRDON TO THE SCENE OF THE LAGOON
The Village humans with Hurton on the far side. Another long beat
and Burke emerges from the water
gasping for breath
long held
and stands with his spear
containing a larger fish! And he walks toward Virdon with a big smile
BURKE As one big producer to another, I hope we graduated and dont have to take any more tests. Virdon smiles at his friend, proudly, as the Guard reminds them where they are.
ARMED GUARD Come! This way! And he leads them off.
56 EXT. OPPOSITE SIDE OF THE LAGOON - ANGLE ON HURTON AND AIDE we see the Armed Guard approaching with Burke and Virdon, coming toward the amazed and delighted group of Villagers who offer restrained nods
smiles at these men
except for Romar
who views them suspiciously.
Hurton walks to Virdon and Burke, examining them again in this new and unexpected light.
HURTON Bandor will arrive tomorrow with new quotas, no doubt. Hell expect me to squirm and complain
hes always wanted to put his nephew in charge here. I think I will spring these new producers on Bandor. I want to see his face
(turning, deciding)
bring them along! Hurton strides off in the direction of the village, Virdon and Burke following under rifle guard
and the Village humans falling in behind.
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57 EXT. THE VILLAGE - SHOOTING DOWN STREET - DAY
The procession is heading toward Hurtons headquarters. From first appearances, it would seem that Virdon and Burke are in serious trouble
guns pointing at them
in the custody of Apes as CAMERA PULLS BACK:
58 ANGLE SHOOTING PAST GALEN - TO THE SCENE
as he views it from a secluded hiding spot near the village, a look of concern as he turns toward CAMERA
and leaves hurriedly.
59 THE SCENE ON THE STREET - ANGLE NEAR ROMAR AND SOMAS HUT
as the procession passes the hut belonging to Romar and Soma
Romar drops from the procession as Soma steps from the hut. Romar watches the others continue toward Hurtons headquarters.
60 ANGLE ON ROMAR AND SOMA as she steps near her husband, a glance toward the departing Virdon and Burke.
SOMA Did they say any more? Romar does not look at his wife as he barks a firm denial.
ROMAR They said nothing!
SOMA I am sure they have seen my father. Gahto is alive!
ROMAR (sternly) Silence! If the gods hear you say his name
they will punish us all! The sea has taken him. Its the law. Be still! A beat of obedience
but she walks away from him
to follow the others
and he joins her, somewhat fearfully.
61 THE SCENE IN FRONT OF HURTONS HEADQUARTERS
as the procession, Hurton and his Aide leading, arrive
Hurton making up his mind about something as they halt there.
HURTON They will occupy the hut of the old discarded fisherman.
62 ANGLE SHOOTING PAST VIRDON AND BURKE - TO HURTON
as they exchange a glance on this overheard remark. A couple of Village humans stand near them to hear.
VIRDON Hear that?
BURKE I think were getting old Gahtos old apartment. On the mention of the name Gahto
Virdon sees the two Humans clap a hand to their mouths
just expressing curiosity about this as they both hear a famuiliar voice.
GALENS VOICE (o.s.) Aha! Here you are!
63 ANOTHER ANGLE - SHOOTING PAST GROUP TO GALEN approaching Hurton and the rest from behind the headquarters structure. Hurton turns in surprise as Galen marches forward with a stern determination.
GALEN (to Virdon, Burke) I told you the next time you strayed off, youd be punished severely. And I meant it. Now come along
! Virdon and Burke, a brief glimpse of freedom, take a step but are stopped short by gunpoint prompted by an interjected command from the surprised and irritated Hurton.
HURTON Wait! Stay! (to Galen) Who are you?
Galen takes a pose of innocent preoccupation. Even irritation.
GALEN My name is
Zooma. I am on an
expedition from Central City. You have found my two
rather ignorant slaves. They have a habit of wandering. I appreciate it. Ill take them now. Galen makes a move as though to reclaim his property, halted by Hurton who says:
HURTON Hold on! This is all
very irregular. He looks toward Virdon and Burke, takes a couple of paces toward them.
HURTON This is not the story they told me! Galen gives Virdon and Burke a look
improvises quickly again.
GALEN Oh, theyre such liars! They lie all the time
about everything. But theyre good workers. Ill take them off your hands
HURTON Just a minute. I must consider this. This is a serious matter.
Hurton steps aside, gesturing for his Aide to join him.
64 CLOSE ON HURTON AND AIDE
as Hurton discusses the matter in low tones with his Aide
as a sounding board
HURTON This could be trouble. If hes from Central City
AIDE Recruiting runaway slaves as producers
It could mean a demotion to the factory level.
HURTON Oh
the smell. (glance at Virdon, Burke) I hate to lose two producers with such great potential
I need them badly, but lets get it over with
65 WIDER ANGLE - ON SCENE
as Hurton strides back to Galen, in front of the rest, with a final authority.
HURTON (to Galen) It is out of my hands. (gesture to Virdon, Burke) Since they have lied
only the gods of the sea can decide their fate. Galen is a little puzzled
but this may not be so bad.
GALEN Well
that sounds reasonable. What are the
gods of the sea?
66 ANGLE ON HURTON
rather disappointed
he hates to see two sturdy producers become shark bait
as he routinely announces:
HURTON The sharks. (gestures to Guard) Bring them along.
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67 EXT. OCEAN FISHING POOL - LONG SHOT - SCENE - DAY We see Virdon and Burke being led across the open sand toward the waters edge at gunpoint by two of the Armed Guards. Slightly behind, Hurton, his Aide and Galen
followed by a group of Villagers to see the gods get their vengeance.
68 MOVING SHOT - WITH GALEN AND HURTON
Galen is protesting
Hurton remaining adamant, just getting himself out of a sticky situation.
GALEN I object. I will not have my
private property
fed to the sharks to satisfy some
backwoods custom! They stop, near enough now, as Hurton eyes the doomed Astronauts with detachment.
HURTON Im sorry, my friend
It may not appeal to your
sophisticated Central City tastes
but in production areas like this
with minimum security
it is the law. (shout to Guards) Send them out
69 REVERSE ANGLE - PAST VIRDON AND BURKE TO GALEN AND HURTON
Virdon and Burke are at the edge of the water now. They turn to see the Armed Guards raise their rifles, aiming at them. They turn to each other now.
VIRDON I guess its time to go swimming. Burke glances out to the water, reacts.
70 THEIR P.O.V. - THE WATER OF THE POOL as CAMERA ZOOMS IN on the circling dorsal fin of a shark.
BURKES VOICE (o.s.) Theyre really sending us out as shark bait!
71 ANGLE ON GALEN AND HURTON
as Galen shouts to the Guards:
GALEN Wait! (then to Hurton) At least give me the satisfaction of giving those two troublemakers a final piece of my mind!
HURTON Very well. But hurry. There are still good fishing hours left
72 WIDER ANGLE - THE SCENE
as Galen plods across the sand, past the Guards, toward Virdon and Burke. As he reaches them:
73 ANGLE ON GALEN, VIRDON, BURKE
Virdon and Burke look with some dissatisfaction at their young friend.
VIRDON Any way out of this? Burke can tell differently from a look at Galen.
BURKE No way
Galen steps close to Virdon, slips the knife out, hands it to him.
GALEN Here
take this
it may help. BURKE Remind me someday to tell you how grateful we are
liars, eh
Zooma!
GALEN It wasnt my idea to try and save that crazy old human. And we hear Hurtons shouted voice:
HURTONS VOICE (o.s.) Enough! Send them to the gods!
VIRDON Watch it, Galen
I dont know if theyre real particular who they shoot
74 ANGLE SHOOTING PAST ARMED GUARDS - TO THE TRIO We see the Guards raise their guns again. Galen steps to one side, Virdon and Burke turn to see the guns aimed at them. And they walk out into the water
the knife not visible.
75 LONG SHOT - THE SCENE
Drawn by curiosity now, Hurton and his Aide, followed by Villagers, edge toward the shore
the Armed Guards still aiming at Virdon and Burke who are now swimming.
76 CLOSE ON VIRDON AND BURKE, SWIMMING
Slow strokes, their eyes peeled on the water ahead.
VIRDON If we could make it to those rocks, maybe
But a shark fin SLICES the water almost within arms reach
startling them.
BURKE Forget it!
77 VARIOUS SHOTS - OF THE STRUGGLE
Virdon and Burke swim apart
the shark slices between them. There is a violent churning of water
the two alternately diving, emerging, going back under with AD-LIB instructions to each other: Watch it
Draw him away
Here he comes
Decoy!
Decoy!
78 ANGLE SHOOTING FROM SHORE - PAST HURTON, GALEN ET AL
All watching now as it is clear the shark attack has begun. Low sounds of fear and awe from the Villagers
who are seeing the gods at work.
79 CLOSE SHOT - THE WATER
No sign of shark or men
but a red pool of blood surfaces.
80 ANGLE SHOOTING FROM SHORE - AS BEFORE
The spectators can see the water has stilled
the gods have had their say. Hurton, satisfied its over, turns to his Aide.
HURTON Well, thats that
get production started
But the Aide, still looking out to the water, points with excited disbelief.
AIDE Look!
81 ANGLE SHOOTING TOWARD WATER
We see signs of life
then Virdon and Burke emerge, wading through the shallower water now
and lift the slain shark over their heads in triumph. A CHEER goes up from the Villagers
Hurton amazed.
82 REVERSE ANGLE
as Virdon and Burke dump their prize on the beach, Hurton and Galen there now
Villagers just behind
craning for a look at the slain god of the sea.
GALEN (to Hurton) Well, Id say that settles it. Your law has been carried out
Ill take my slaves and be on my way
But Hurtons calculator mind is at work
the Astronauts success is their own undoing
as he sees quotas being filled by these two astounding producers.
HURTON Im not too sure about that
And we hear the thundering SOUND of an approaching horse!
83 ANOTHER ANGLE - SHOOTING DOWN THE BEACH
The Mounted Patrol who discovered the empty raft rides up, directly into their midst, dismounts, and comes to Hurton.
MOUNTED PATROL The float
carrying old Gahto to the gods. On the beach
the lashings cut
someone has defied the gods!
The Villagers draw back in fear as Hurton is enraged at this.
HURTON This is sacrilege
high treason!
84 CLOSE ON ROMAR AND SOMA
Standing among the Villagers, she turns excitedly to her husband
in a low whisper
SOMA I knew it
hes alive.
ROMAR Be still
hell hear you.
85 ANGLE SHOOTING PAST THEM TO HURTON
who now demands of the Villagers in general:
HURTON Do any of you know about this!?
No response from the mute Villagers. Hurton barks an order to the Mounted Patrol who has just reported the discovery.
HURTON The old man cannot be far. Find him!
Then Hurton sees Romar and Soma
and strides straight through the other Villagers to them. Virdon and Burke follow, slightly behind
as Hurton now faces the couple.
HURTON Do you know anything about this?
No response.
HURTON Speak!
They only shake their heads. But Soma seems to be exchanging a glance with the Astronauts behind Hurton. Hurton wheels on them
a questioning look for a tense beat. Then
looking at Virdon and Burke but directing his statement to Galen who stands with them:
HURTON I dont think they will leave here just now. This is a matter for Bandor to decide! If Gahto lives
someone must die!
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